Sounds whispering,
Ringing my ears,
My steps wavering,
Nothing much but just a whisper.
Every step breaks the harmony,
Standing still amidst dark shadows,
Waiting for more whispers,
The sounds of anguish,
Birds chirping air roaring,
A hole in my heart,
And a tiny whisper.
Tears roll down,
Without any hint,
The wild quivering,
Follows a creepy darkness,
A step of caution,
And you stand still,
A step ahead,
And you sweep.
Tall dark whispers,
Depth of million emotions,
Trembling hands and whispering soul,
Crying in the dark,
Yelling for help,
With just a tiny whisper.
lovely write..beautiful use of words....but y so sad sad??!!??...still not happy wid mumbai kya...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful portray of emotions..the perfect Tanvi poem :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the last two lines :)
ReplyDeletebaaki poem badi confusing hai
Every whisper
ReplyDeleteOf every waking hour
I'm choosing my confessions
Trying to keep an eye on you
Like a hurt, lost and blinded fool, fool
Oh no, I've said too much
~Losing my religion R.E.M
Ooh that pinches!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete