Walking....feeling...



The dark long street,
Longer and darker it seems,
As much as I never thought before,
Someone walking down my thoughts this time,
A wee bit creepy I feel.

The snow that sparkles,
With the dim light at this time,
It’s just me alone,
And the darkness aloof.

Hearing of bats making noise,
Watching the naked trees stand still,
As the ice melts on my skin,
A chill runs down my spine,
Still holding onto it,
With the questioning glance.

I don’t know what’s going on in my mind,
Just something that I want to enjoy now,
Is being with myself,
Lonely, aloof, in the shining dark,
Listening to my beats,
Which is not so sweet,
But will cease to exist.

I know I always said,
I like to be alone,
I always do,
But today I feel,
If someone down this road,
Would accompany me,
In being me!


Comments

  1. Hey, Hi
    that was a nice one, the feeling or rather the longing to have someone walk by our side...the winter night...the silence...
    nicely portrayed..

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  2. I agree with Eon... very nicely portrayed... i hope your're well my friend.. brightest blessings.^^

    ~Kelvin

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  3. And I always liked solitude. Yet, there is sometimes a longing that someone would walk around, hushed, such that I knew that the person is around, yet am not disturbed and the state of solitude is maintained, no invasion, and thus, no evasion.

    Nice one, but I remember the fun side of this place. I might miss it someday. :P Not yet.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. its a bad world out there.. you are numero uno always .. So even though we wish someone was there .. its US who have to make that hard journey...



    Bikram's

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  5. Hey tanu,
    i second you here. I too love my solitude.. It cites yet the pain of it is what is enjoyable. But yet again some one to be here to accompany is welcome :)

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  6. Hello,
    After a longtime,again im reading ur blogs.it is so cute...really liked it.It is like a cobination or a distinct array of pictures you have drawn that could capture the attraction of a reader...
    im glad ...because i could read u again..
    take care...

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  7. @Harsh: Well... the feeling was still not expressed properly, because what i have in mind is still at large :P Its in chaos, this was a part of it.. :)glad you liked :)

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  8. @Kelvin: Thank you buddy.. :) I am great..hope you are too :)

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  9. @Anshul: Yes the solitude is maintained... the fun side... ummm.. i doubt about you missing it.. :) :D I bet you won't.. :) Promise!

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  10. @Bikranjit: Rightly said.. i agree.. :) :) Thanks :)

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  11. @Deepika: I know you agree, even i love my solitude, till now i thought it was my only happiness that i possess...now i have started questioning that.. :) Thanks dear :)

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  12. @Nowhereboy: I am glad to see you back.. :) :) It was cute? Wow... thanks :) :) Its an array of pictures, true very true, wish i could portray more clearly.. :) Thanks :)

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  13. Hi,
    Loved the post.
    Has the reference to snow do something with your stay at Moscow?
    I am a lover of solitude, but a feeling that someone is walking besides me gives me the strength to walk further in the paths of troubles.
    Nice read.

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  14. Beautifully written and portrayed. I must say you can write really well. Enjoyed my stay here! :)

    By the way, hope you enjoy reading my post too -
    To hold you in my arms, to promise you my love!

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  15. well..all u need is to put ur mind to what u love...!!! and if u don't know what u love...then, u r seriously missing somebody..!!
    nice creation..!!! kaafi zyada deep ho gaya..!!

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  16. Hey Tanu,

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    Cheers !!

    Btw, interesting read, I think everyone goes thru those lonely walks thru life, armed with our thoughts n ourselves, whn we wish fr another by our side. I noticed ur profile sayin u're in Moscow, somehow as i ws readin the poem, i cud picture u walkin in red by the snow covered trees, slowly n pensively, absorbing the world around u in comfortable solitude. Again, the choice of the pic by the poem just added to the whole poem in a very magical way. Very well written.

    Do vote.
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    :)

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  17. @Netha: Wow... nice to see you. :) i guess the reference is yupp maybe... where you live you tend to express things happening in the same environment.. :) True.. :)
    Thanks

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  18. @Romeo Das: Thanks for the appreciation.. your post was nice too :) thanks

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  19. @Dhawal: Why do you always say something and which stucks a chord?! :P it got me thinking... i don't know what i love,i am confused does that seriously mean i am missing somebody?? Are you just kidding me? :P Heehee and kaafi deep tera comment ho gaya :P thanks

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  20. @Raj: Welcome to my blog.. :) Thanks for the kind words... i am glad you liked.. :)
    And your blog is good, i liked the post very much.. :)Keep coming..

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  21. ab yaar...main toh bas sach likh raha tha... baaki ab tujhe wo thinking laga, toh main kya kar sakta hoon..!!! :P

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  22. Dhawal...hehehhee :D rofl :D Thats so funny.. :P :P

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  23. very true,
    sometime we do need someone to be with us....
    very well expressed thoughts...

    Best wishes,
    irfan

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  24. @Irfan: Hey welcome to my blog.. :) Thanks for the appreciating words :).. keep coming :)

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  25. hi...glad i got to read this piece of urs...it was so engrossin...the want actually attracts all ur attention...n use of such simple words create such an amazin impact...frankly loved it...:)

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  26. how true you eloberate a solo soul's feelings.
    i nevr came across these kind of stuffs which prescribes the true feeling.
    it is suprb i like ur postings ...

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  27. @Vaisakhi: Thank you sweetie for the wonderful appreciation. Sorry for being late here.

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  28. Mr.Anonymous reader if you will please post the comment with a small name I'd be glad :)Thank you

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