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 Darkness conceals vacuum,
It conceals truth,
With a life to behold.

When we see people leave us,
The sleek figure walking away,
As the distance grows between our bodies,
Till there is nothing but emptiness,
And what you hear is just silence of your soul.

The wind blows hard,
It conceals your fear,
The dark which is held,
Turns to you with comfort,
Comfort of lies and nothingness.

When I see you sitting beside,
The distance that seems,
Is more than miles,
In darkness your face seems bruised,
With emotions overwhelming.

The darkness is long enchanting,
Covered with sands of time,
The light from the broken window,
Fills up my eyes, teary eyes,
The pain it causes,
Captures me within.

The dark tells a story,
Something that is within.


Comments

  1. Deja vu', life, loneliness, loss, Love, story!
    what do u know about either of them?!

    had i not read this poem i would have probably gone for nil. now i am not all that sure :P

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  2. As far as I know about psychology we write poems on Darkness,loneliness only we fear of loosing some one/lost some one or if sumthng isn't normal.(Atleast this is true in my case,yet I tell others think from writers view..:P )
    Hope everything is fine with you Tanvi.
    Take Care

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  3. Darkness does tell a story indeed. Many distant forgotten things come alive when the dark rises.

    Nicely done.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Hey, Hi
    indeed, the story that aprouts in the dark alleys of the turbulent mind...often the silence of the soul as you said...
    beautiful...


    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  5. Darkness is just another side of viewing light :) Nice read :)

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  6. Nice writing...Deja vu after all!!

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  7. This post reflects hurt sentiments and loneliness.. I hope you find light soon! Its a cliche but I'm trying to find happiness in small things in life!

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  8. YEs darkness tells a story too.. great are the ones who LEARN from that Story and hopefully it doesnot happen again ...

    Bikram's

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  9. darkness has a lot to conceal...but it is always difficult to deciphr ne of its secret...one done 2 more come up....lovely write..:)

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  10. ...if you close your eyes and shut everything then you'll feel what darkness has to offer you....in my life, i've learned the essence of silence...now i can walk in the dark without my eyes and for now i know how to listen more than what i'm suppose to be heard...

    Good day.

    ~Kelvin

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  11. @Raj: Really?!Well.. You can't ever be sure :P Thanks :)

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  12. @Neeha: Thats true... Its true in everyone's case... :) Everything is fine :) Thanks :)

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  13. @Anshul: Yes they arise and cause a storm :) Thank you :)

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  14. @Harsh: The silence of the soul :) Thanks :) :)

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  15. @Rachit: Well said :) :) Thank you :)

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  16. @Ria: Thanks for dropping by :) :)

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  17. @Prerna: Yea rightly understood :) :) Small things give true happiness :) :) Thanks :)

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  18. @Prerna: Yea rightly understood :) :) Small things give true happiness :) :) Thanks :)

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  19. @Bikram: True :) :) Thanks :)

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  20. @Vaisakhi: :) Thanks for dropping here :)

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  21. @Kelvin: I can listen more than what i am supposed to be heard :) :) Nice :) :) Thank you:)

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  22. wonderful...!!
    but darkness is also the unseen force that motivates us to lead towards the brightness of light..!!

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