Wondering i stand,
In my balcony,
Its so chilly,
That my hands are now numb,
My legs ice,
My lips white.
The cars moving around,
Morning a sleepy one i see,
People wearing warm clothing moving around,
I hear mumbles and voices of people moving,
Cars making noise,
It comes around my senses to tell its too cold.
I ponder about many things,
My mind feels like a worm of hurdles,
Living on the edge of life,
But i know only one thing,
I am here for the love of my life,
My dreams that i see,
The ones i need to acomplish,
Oh my love this is just for you.
Why do i feel you sometimes,
Don’t understand what i do?
I wonder if you really know me?
There are lots of questions,
Which you need to answer,
There are ones which you shouldn’t,
I love it, i love myself, i love you,
I just love,
And thats all i can say now.
Oh! The love of my life!
Nice one:)
ReplyDeleteAnd why don't you think of removing word verification??
It's a bit difficult.
so true... I felt it was my story... I'm deeply moved..!!! :D
ReplyDeleteSorry, without your permission I used few lines for my FB status. :P
Love thyself, and love thy enemy. And please, do remember to invent a cure for cancer.:P
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ReplyDeleteWell, that sounds natural...as in, no build up, nothing, just plain thoughts...
beautiful...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
That's a simple and a beautiful one...
ReplyDeletegood one :)
Take Care
Wow this is good one .. story of my life ...
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Nice one...really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThat's another lovely poem..gr8 work
ReplyDeleteThe New look of ur blog is very nice..
Cheers
nice read!..some things are simply inexplicable though...
ReplyDeletenice one..!!! found it a but abrupt in the end...!!! but, the portrayal was awesome..!!! seems like now u r putting ur brain also into ur writings alongwith ur heart..!!!
ReplyDelete@Neeha: Thanks... i did think so.. i'll :)
ReplyDelete@Rachit: I see :P :)
ReplyDelete@Anshul: Are you trying to say that i forgot cancer?? :P
ReplyDelete@Harsh: Umm... :) Yes:) Thanks
ReplyDelete@Fatima: Thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Bikramjit: Really?! Nice :)
ReplyDelete@Ria: Thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Shail: Thanks :) I am glad you liked :)
ReplyDelete@4 Those who care: True... i agree :)
ReplyDelete@Dhawal: If you thought till now it was only my heart then its wrong.. :P 'cause before it was all but imaginary fiction, somethings which i just felt could be felt.. but now its with the heart too :) Hehee :D
ReplyDeleteHow could you feel on February 21 :P
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