Haunting presence


Sometimes when I am here,
Sitting lonely sipping coffee,
The wild night smakes my skin shiver,
The cold snow brings back memory.

Somewhere deep down my thoughts,
Killed horizans and lovely hurts,
On a cold frosty night,
Your unwanted presence haunts my soul.

Every particle of dismay,
Every thought of hatred,
How I can live without that,
The only unwanted presence,
That brings miles down my path.



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  1. Flying at the speed of light
    Thoughts were spinning in my head
    So many things were left unsaid
    It's hard to let go...

    (Oh!) I know what it takes to move on,
    I know how it feels to lie,
    All I wanna do
    Is trade this life for something new
    Holding on to what I haven't got


    and hence, the nights (dark) are back? just like that?

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  2. "How I can live without that,
    The only unwanted presence"

    that one feels like a mind in turbulence, denial or maybe confusion...

    welcome back angel and yes, u r back with a bang.. with greater zeal :)

    loved it... and more coz u wrote it.

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  3. Love is bad .. and so many people get hurt from it .. yet it is divine tooo

    unwanted presence well LIFE and especially our HEART is weird it alwys yerns for that what is unwanted ..

    a lovely poem

    Bikram's

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  4. Nice poem.

    Every word is beautifully written.

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  5. Listen to "another one bites the dust" by queen a few times. Then see what happens to your mood!

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  6. Painful...love can hurt many a times.

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  7. You can't hate that someone special, no matter what he says, what he does, he stays there in you within you... You can't escape...you never can...

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  8. I agree with Bikram's comment..
    Love may hurt badly,but still its when we realize everything-good & bad,love & hatred etc.
    Nice poem:)

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  9. Beautiful and short...
    Have a nice time out there...:)

    Regards...
    Vaisakh

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  10. that sounds definitely haunting. Painfully so. Surprising how words can make the worst of pains seem so beautiful in poetry, right?

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  11. sad one again...!!!!! :-( yaar..how abt one that is full of masti n all.. m waiting to read one such creation from u..!! :) :)
    but these lines are brillliantly crafted too..!! nice as always..!!

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  12. @Anshul: Nice lines dude :)
    Oh I know what you mean to say :P
    Its dark just like that...common you know me :P

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  13. @Deepika: Thank you...that line tells about my confused state on that day.... I an glad :)

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  14. @Bikramjit: So very true...thats what makes me more sad... Thanks for visiting me again.... I did visit you but could not comment cause now it has become very complicated.. :) Don't mind :)

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  15. @Chandrika: Thank you...i appreciate your coming in again :)

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  16. @Ujjwal: I guess you are right but dude i wish i was you :P

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  17. @Ria: True thanks for dropping by :)

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  18. @Gvsparx: So sooo true... :)

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  19. @Neeha: I agree with both of you.. I am thankful :)

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  20. @Vaisakh: Thank you dude... i will you too take care :)

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  21. @Beauty and beast: Ofcourse yaar :) Thank you

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  22. @Dhawal: Ye dude the thing is poems come to my mind only when i am sad :P I don't know why.... will try definitely :) Thanks :)

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