The lost love
There was a day not long ago,
We thought of each other,
Lost in thoughts we cared for each other.
And today is a day,
When we are just there for each other,
As silent spectators.
The silence is a long battle,
Louder than emotions it expresses,
And we are still stuck up,
But we have lost that loving feeling,
We lost that loving feeling..........
Actualy i didnt get it............
ReplyDeleteYou toh just let it be :P
ReplyDeletehehe
u know wht ..its ur best up till now.
ReplyDeleteit make me remember someone...i like it..
@Ansh: Thanks.....i have written it for someone, and its a pleasure that you could relate as i am not a poet, and you know that :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteits great tanni..."AWESOME"
i think tht someone is very special for...
ReplyDelete@Pooja: Thanks dear!
ReplyDelete@Ansh: Its true :)
...very nice piece... it has this feeling of sincerety out of lonely words...(^^)
ReplyDeleteTake care!!!:)
@Windowlad: Thanks for the compliment :)
ReplyDeletewhen the love stops, so should the relation, it should be a heart felt compulsion, not a forcible obligation.
ReplyDeleteRegards
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Blasphemous Aesthete: The heart felt compulsion is painful though its necessary.
ReplyDeleteThanks,
lovely...!
ReplyDeleteIt is simply amazing!!
ReplyDeleteYou are no more an amateur!!
I would love to read more of you..
Blog:GvSparx
Twitter:@GvSparx
@Dhawal: Thank you : ):)
ReplyDelete@Gv: Haaye I saw this soo soo late... I appreciate your coming so soon, and me being late :P :P
ReplyDeleteYears late :P
ReplyDelete23 August, 2011
Not lost :)