Piece


The lost love

There was a day not long ago,
We thought of each other,
Lost in thoughts we cared for each other.

And today is a day,
When we are just there for each other,
As silent spectators.

The silence is a long battle,
Louder than emotions it expresses,
And we are still stuck up,

But we have lost that loving feeling,
We lost that loving feeling..........

Comments

  1. Actualy i didnt get it............

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  2. You toh just let it be :P
    hehe

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  3. u know wht ..its ur best up till now.
    it make me remember someone...i like it..

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  4. @Ansh: Thanks.....i have written it for someone, and its a pleasure that you could relate as i am not a poet, and you know that :)

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  5. WOW!!!!!!!!
    its great tanni..."AWESOME"

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  6. i think tht someone is very special for...

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  7. @Pooja: Thanks dear!
    @Ansh: Its true :)

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  8. ...very nice piece... it has this feeling of sincerety out of lonely words...(^^)

    Take care!!!:)

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  9. @Windowlad: Thanks for the compliment :)

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  10. when the love stops, so should the relation, it should be a heart felt compulsion, not a forcible obligation.

    Regards
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  11. @Blasphemous Aesthete: The heart felt compulsion is painful though its necessary.

    Thanks,

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  12. It is simply amazing!!
    You are no more an amateur!!

    I would love to read more of you..
    Blog:GvSparx
    Twitter:@GvSparx

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  13. @Gv: Haaye I saw this soo soo late... I appreciate your coming so soon, and me being late :P :P

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  14. Years late :P
    23 August, 2011
    Not lost :)

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